Walton on Naze Pier photoshoot

coolcat · 23rd June 2017, 23:01

One taken this evening of the model at our camera club photoshoot on Walton Pier

Full Dynamic by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr

sworks · 23rd June 2017, 23:53

Works well in black and white, maybe try lightening her eyes a little as they look quite dark on my iPad?

coolcat · 24th June 2017, 06:47

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Originally Posted by sworks

Works well in black and white, maybe try lightening her eyes a little as they look quite dark on my iPad?

Already done, any further and they didn't look natural Mark

Edit......Just checked back and I had adjusted the eyes before the mono conversion so the eyes had darkened down from that

Further edit just now, see what you think ?

Full Dynamic copy by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr

coolcat · 24th June 2017, 07:54

Here is a colour effort from the same shoot.
I was really having to work with flat lighting unfortunately !

CC9J3342 by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr

coolcat · 24th June 2017, 07:55

We won't mention the models slight lipstick malfunction

coolcat · 24th June 2017, 08:14

Colour version of the original photo with a little play on the skin tones and softened

skin softened by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr

b_1_rd · 24th June 2017, 08:33

The last one is best I think.

I'd clone out that spot on her jeans. Would be worth trying to tidy the top lip malfunction if you've got the patience and a steady hand

Nice shot.

coolcat · 24th June 2017, 09:02

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Originally Posted by b_1_rd

The last one is best I think.

I'd clone out that spot on her jeans. Would be worth trying to tidy the top lip malfunction if you've got the patience and a steady hand

Nice shot.

I have and I will but on the back burner for future edits

I'm at work so just a little touch up........no sniggering at the back

Cloned mark out on jeans and a very rough (will do it properly when I'm at home and not at work) bit of editing to the lipstick

skin softened_ by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr

sworks · 24th June 2017, 12:02

I think I prefer the colour version of the last edit if I'm honest after seeing both versions

Canonite · 25th June 2017, 06:22

I like the warmer tones of the colour version, its more my style. Shame about the eyes, have you tried a bit of dodge/burn on a seperate layer mask?
I might be tempted to clone out the railing too to see if it isolates the subject more. Its not distracting though as DoF has softened it out.

23rd June 2017, 23:01	#1
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24th June 2017, 07:54	#4
coolcat This is my second home Audi Q3 TDI S-Line Quattro Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Clacton On Sea/On the boat somewhere Posts: 51,154 Thanks: 9,890 Thanked 12,235 Times in 8,232 Posts	Here is a colour effort from the same shoot. I was really having to work with flat lighting unfortunately ! CC9J3342 by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr __________________ Jeff.

24th June 2017, 07:55	#5
coolcat This is my second home Audi Q3 TDI S-Line Quattro Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Clacton On Sea/On the boat somewhere Posts: 51,154 Thanks: 9,890 Thanked 12,235 Times in 8,232 Posts	We won't mention the models slight lipstick malfunction __________________ Jeff.

24th June 2017, 08:14	#6
coolcat This is my second home Audi Q3 TDI S-Line Quattro Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Clacton On Sea/On the boat somewhere Posts: 51,154 Thanks: 9,890 Thanked 12,235 Times in 8,232 Posts	Colour version of the original photo with a little play on the skin tones and softened skin softened by Jeff Cranwell, on Flickr __________________ Jeff.

24th June 2017, 08:33	#7
b_1_rd Loves to post None Join Date: Apr 2017 Location: Caldicot Posts: 259 Thanks: 76 Thanked 181 Times in 99 Posts	The last one is best I think. I'd clone out that spot on her jeans. Would be worth trying to tidy the top lip malfunction if you've got the patience and a steady hand Nice shot.

24th June 2017, 12:02	#9
sworks Been absent for a while… Rover 75 Tourer, Classic mini Cooper S, Abarth 595 competizione, MG TF and a Hyundai Tucson PHEV Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Cumbria Posts: 13,065 Thanks: 1,033 Thanked 1,686 Times in 1,040 Posts	I think I prefer the colour version of the last edit if I'm honest after seeing both versions __________________ ................................................. 'Marmite' Possibly one of the most famous 75 tourers produced! left the production line as the last of only Three Rover 75 tourers produced in Trophy Yellow. 48 hours later Longbridge closed. The last sold ordered 75 Tourer. Paid for by the Phoenix Four and handed over by John Towers to the Warwickshire Northampton Air ambulance service as a Rapid Response vehicle

25th June 2017, 06:22	#10
Canonite This is my second home BMW 330d Tourer, MG ZT 180 SE XPG, VW Polo 6R 1.2 TDI Bluemotion Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: York Posts: 6,022 Thanks: 363 Thanked 574 Times in 319 Posts	I like the warmer tones of the colour version, its more my style. Shame about the eyes, have you tried a bit of dodge/burn on a seperate layer mask? I might be tempted to clone out the railing too to see if it isolates the subject more. Its not distracting though as DoF has softened it out.